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Jacky
Joined: Jan 06 2008
Poems: 5
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Location: Wilmington Ca. |
| Posted: Sun, Feb 03 2008, 12:21 AM |
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This is my first story Let me know if u like it.
It was A normal day like any other. The Kids got up and got ready 4 school not nowing that there last day in High School in L.A. was ganna be the one that chainges there life 4 ever.
On one of L.A., SadGirl and (her step brother) Gonzo were geting ready 4 school. They kissed there hefita and hefito good byeand walked out. They bout got in Gomzo's navyblue 64 ragtop Impala that him and his sister fixed, and she loved so much. They worked on it for 5months. Jacky didn't know that her brother was gana give it 2 her as a precent 4 fineshing High Shcool.
On the other side, Douce and (his Brother) Dizzy were waking up 2 go 2 school. They goot ready and kissed there hefita and there tia. They didn't have a dad, There dad walked out on them when the mom was pregnet with Dizzy. They were ok with out him, there family was always happy. They walled out of the house and got in 2 Douce's car. Dizzy has a car also, but they take turns every week who has 2 drive 2 school. Douce, had a black Monte Carlo that was so beutifull that every body looks at wene he passes by. Dizzy, has a gray El Camino that his dad left. He loved that car so much, bcuz he had a peace of his dad with him. They left an were on there way 2 school.
Gonzo and SadGirl Got 2 chool and spoded there friends and parked next 2 them. As soon as they parked Douce and Dizzy got there and parked in front of them, They saw wach other and mad gogged each outher.
Dizzy: "Is that a car or a pinche bote the basura!?"
SadGirl: With a mean look in her face "Fuck U puto add least I have a car!"
Dizzy: All pist off "Fuck u bitch, Why don't u shut up and come and suck my dick!?"
As soon as he sead that Gonzo ran up 2 him and punched Dizzy in the face. Dizzy wen't strait down 2 the floor.
Gonzo: "What the fuck did u say 2 my lil carnalita?"
Douce Jumped in and picked up his lil carnal and 2 see if he was ok.
Douce: "What the fuck, don't u ever tuch my lil carnalito. Me entiendes puto!?"
Gonzo: "You better check him and he need 2 say sorry 2 my carnalita."
Douce: Looks at Dizzy "Say sorry 2 this beutifull women 4 what u sead 2 her or I'll kick ur ass."
SadGirl turns read wene Douce sead that about her. Her brother sees that and he gets mad, but didn't say any thing 2 her,
Dizzy: "I'm sorry 4 what I sead."
She takes the apolige and they all walk bcak 2 there own cars. As soon as they get there Gonzo pulls SadGirl by the arm and has her agens the car.
Gonzo: "What the fuck, was up with u turning red. You better not talk 2 that pendejo ever. We are from 18st and they r from Florencia13 we don't get along!"
The bell ring and every body heads 2 there homerooms on there first day back from brake. Gonzo walked SadGirl 2 her homeroom, but she was crying bcuz her brother grabed her arm hard. He apolegises, hugs her, and gives her a kiss on her head. She smiles back at him and walks in 2 her homeroom.
SadGirl sits down and looks around and doesn't see any body she knows. As she looks out the windo some one comes next 2 her. She doesn't even turn around.....
If u want more comment this and I'll write more. bye xoxo muahhh!!!!
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reedadeet
Joined: Jan 18 2008
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Location: KILLA CITY |
| Posted: Tue, Feb 05 2008, 10:40 AM Post subject: |
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| AY MIJA I LIKED IT ALOT THAT WAS HELLA TIGHT | |
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cabrona
Joined: Jan 15 2008
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| Posted: Fri, Feb 22 2008, 10:42 AM Post subject: |
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| thats firme mija but finish the story ma | |
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mzbrownluv
Joined: Jan 11 2008
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Location: Texas |
| Posted: Mon, Mar 03 2008, 11:23 AM Post subject: |
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| so wheres da rest.....???? | |
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chicanas3xy13
Joined: Dec 05 2007
Poems: 14
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Location: 3ast Coast |
| Posted: Thu, Mar 06 2008, 7:29 AM Post subject: |
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I kno huh u should finsih it que no?? ![[Rosa]](images/smiles/53.gif "Rosa") | |
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bollarsaba
Joined: Jul 16 2008
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Location: Phx, AZ |
| Posted: Wed, Jul 16 2008, 11:31 AM Post subject: |
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mama, isn't this on BrownPride? ![[ :?]](images/smiles/smiley29.gif ":?")
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