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ThE nEvErEnDiNg WaR

Author Article
grillz

Joined: May 11 2008
Poems: 5
Comments: 2
Location: CALIFAS
 Posted: Fri, Jun 06 2008, 4:12 AM

People talking shit,
Acting like they know you,
Talking about nothing,
Starting up something.

Raza fighting raza,
Fighting over nothing,
Choosing a color and number,
Over their own familia y friends.

Countries fighting countries,
Fighting over power and weapons,
Only to talk about peace later,
Saying they do it for the good of their country.

As the world fills with tears of pain,
Crying over their lost ones,
In this endless war we fight everyday,
Where everyone hates everyone,
Not caring for the families and friends they leave weeping.
Rating: 5.00/5.00 [1] total votes

Author Comments
fsolis


Joined: Sep 09 2007
Poems: 24
Comments: 13
 Posted: Fri, Jun 06 2008, 8:50 AM  Post subject:

Very nice,did you write this? Cause this is really swell! []
Rating: 0.00/5.00 [0]
901Chicano


Joined: Mar 27 2008
Poems: 7
Comments: 6
 Posted: Fri, Jun 06 2008, 11:29 AM  Post subject:

that was a good poem. []
Rating: 0.00/5.00 [0]
solitox3


Joined: May 08 2008
Poems: 3
Comments: 3
Location: ChInO CaLIFaS
 Posted: Sat, Jun 07 2008, 12:51 AM  Post subject:

NICE....NICE....
Rating: 0.00/5.00 [0]
 

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