WHEN NIGHTMARES PERSIST,
AND DREAMS SEEM SO REAL,
WHEN MY FEAR ATTACKS,
AND THE MASK IS NO LONGER STEEL,
WHEN MY DESIRE SEEMS UNQUENCHABLE,
I LOOK INTO THE EYES OF OTHERS,
AND THEIR EYES ARE A MIRROR,
OF WAT I TRULY FEEL,

REFLECTIONS OF MY SOUL

WHEN MY LIFE HAS NO MEANIING,
AND THE WORLD IS STILL,
WORDS HAVE NOTHING TO CONVEY,
AND LAUGHTER IS THE IRONY OF THE DAY,
AND TOMORROW IS A DAY SO FAR AWAY,

REFLECTIONS OF MY SOUL

WHEN MUSIC CAUSES MY BODY TO SWAY,
AND THE THOUGHTS OF FALLIN IN LOVE,
ENCOURAGE ME TO FACE ANOTHER DAY,
WHEN A WELCOMED TOUCH,
HITS ME WITH A WARMTH GREATER THAN HEAT,
A SIMPLE HUG BRINGS OUT AND OVER WHELMING,
FEELIN OF PEACE,

REFLECTIONS OF MY SOUL

WHEN MY ANGER TURNS TO RAGE,
AND MY MOTHERS TEARS FALL BECAUSE OF PAIN,
WHEN MY FATHERS ABSENCE IS PROVKED BY SHAME,
AND MY HOMIEZ LIVES ARE STOLEN
BY THE CRUELTY OF THE GAME...

ALL U SEE...IS ME...
REFLECTIONS OF MY SOUL

[font=Comic Sans MS] I'm very picky when it comes down to poetry, and I can sometimes give a lot of negative critisism, but I have to give you many props for such a well thought poem. Not only is it original, but it really got to me.

Very nice. n_n; [/font]

Agreed, that is original and I like it. keep posting!

tambien have to agree when i was reading it , it touched me..nice..

wow.....i really like that!!!! nice job.....you really should post more!!!

aww, that was beautiful.

awwww thanks u guys