"Eat"

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"Eat"

Postby niyorco on Sun, Jan 13 2008, 8:03 PM

Screams away me,
from a goodnight's rest.
Sheltered beneath my sheets.
Body covered in cold sweat,
I sense my madness and it eats.

A shadow sits aside my bed.
Legs crossed and hands together.
His faceless grin and eyes of red,
signs my sanity wont last forever.

My eyes gaze,
throughout my room.
Words mumbling with no understand.
A torture future,
I now presume.
I'll take a victim with merciless hand.

Years I ignored this little bubble.
But knew it grew withing my pit.
Hoped it would leave with no trouble,
too late now for here it sits.

"I know you."
I tell the shadow.
"I'm not surprised of your presence.
You've been with me since my cradle,
the reason for my life unpleasent.

Evil thoughts you gave my head.
I pushed away from my mind.
A few selected you wanted dead.
I resisted so many times.

So many thoughts of hell's fire and heat.
For all the lives I will take.
Slowly my conscience this shadow did eat,
and left my mind in a sinful state.

"You think it's wise that you are here,
in the preasence of my home?
I'll take the lives! I have no fear!
First I'll end your's,
by taking my own!"




Hello everyone. Allow me the pleasure to introduce myself. I am the underground author/poet Genaro a.k.a "Niyorco". I was just told about this site. I would like to share one of my favorite poems with you all. Hope you all enjoyed! I look foward to checking out your literature works too! Paz!
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Postby iPedro on Sun, Jan 13 2008, 9:08 PM

That was deep man... good that you've made your way over here.
I look forward to reading more...
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Postby niyorco on Sun, Jan 13 2008, 9:13 PM

^^ Thanks homie. I'm glad you enjoyed. It's one of my favorites that I ever wrote. I'll be shairing more in the future.
Niyorco Books Presents:

"Lockdown -- a barrio tale"
A Chicano Urban theme novel.
Now available through myspace!

Check it out in myspace blogs!

http://myspace.com/Niyorco
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Postby MzBrownEyes on Mon, Jan 14 2008, 5:49 AM

im telling you niyo your gifted!
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Postby niyorco on Mon, Jan 14 2008, 12:02 PM

thank you MzBrownEyes! I sure appreciate it! :blushing:
Niyorco Books Presents:

"Lockdown -- a barrio tale"
A Chicano Urban theme novel.
Now available through myspace!

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http://myspace.com/Niyorco
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Postby Pika_Guerita on Tue, Jan 15 2008, 3:01 PM

:Clap:
R.I.P. Tia Sherly <3 you always and forever
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Postby niyorco on Tue, Jan 15 2008, 3:38 PM

thank you!
Niyorco Books Presents:

"Lockdown -- a barrio tale"
A Chicano Urban theme novel.
Now available through myspace!

Check it out in myspace blogs!

http://myspace.com/Niyorco
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