"awake"

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"awake"

Postby niyorco on Thu, Jan 17 2008, 10:45 PM

Poisoned of a biased way,
Subdued into the depths of hell.
Dreading day by day,
the memory in which his soul had fell.


Never lost, only forgotten.
Cast into another world.
Damned away by the evil's toy,
as mortals mocked with a paining twirl.


Centuries, he slept away.
Awaited for the time to come.
Smelled the air of vengeance one day,
and rose from the grave beyond.


Opened his eyes to the new world.
A new experience, a path he'll learn.
The moon shines and he smells the blood,
The time is near for his pain that yearns.


Now he walks upon the melody…
in nights of fog and crispy mist.
Smiles with pleasure and the remedy,
to cast his hell of torturing bliss!
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Postby brwn_eyes on Thu, Jan 17 2008, 10:49 PM

wow.....tienes muchisisisimo talento!!!! I really like that!!!! :Clap:






**feel free to share more*** :wink:
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Postby niyorco on Thu, Jan 17 2008, 10:57 PM

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed, this one is based on one of my characters that Im pondering on writing a story on. Thanks for viewing.
Niyorco Books Presents:

"Lockdown -- a barrio tale"
A Chicano Urban theme novel.
Now available through myspace!

Check it out in myspace blogs!

http://myspace.com/Niyorco
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