"Deep street corner"

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"Deep street corner"

Postby niyorco on Thu, Jan 17 2008, 11:14 PM

Deep street's corner,
Where shadows creep.
Drugs hold hands
Of an addict's peak….

Misty haze in rising smells,
Itching rats and laughs of hell,
Dry mouth cotton no water wells.
Only the needle and it's liquid spell.

Deep street's corner,
The shadow follows.
This lonely addict
Who has no brother.

She has no life
Or so it seems.
But death is welcomed
Into her scene.

Deep street's corner,
Of dark and sorrow,
Death awaits the addicts hour.
To take away the ruined soul,
To live no more,
In her world so cold….
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Postby brwn_eyes on Sat, Jan 19 2008, 12:22 PM

:Clap: :Clap: :Clap: niiiiiiiice!!! i really liked this one!

Thank you very much for sharing your poems here!!!! I know i really enjoy reading them. I really like poetry. Can't write myself....lol....but love reading other peoples work!!! :Clap:
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Postby niyorco on Sat, Jan 19 2008, 2:17 PM

Thanks, I sure appreciate it! Just doing what I love to do.
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Postby iPedro on Sun, Jan 20 2008, 5:12 PM

They're good... I like them too. :cool:
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Postby niyorco on Mon, Jan 21 2008, 2:32 PM

thanks!
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Postby chicano on Wed, Jan 23 2008, 12:47 AM

[font=Comic Sans MS]Not bad, I liked it. [/font]
her [9:59 P.M.]: phss im never letting you go..
i'll be bugging you if your not with me.. cuz you know what?
aha Y0UR MiNE.. jUP Mi0.. S0 fCK EVERY0NE ELSE.. CUZ i L0VE
Y0U & iM G0NNA BE WiTH Y0U f0REVER. Y0UR tHE 0NE f0R ME.

Right..
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Postby niyorco on Wed, Jan 23 2008, 1:15 PM

Thanks Chicano.
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"Lockdown -- a barrio tale"
A Chicano Urban theme novel.
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Postby MuchoMuyKrazy on Wed, Jan 23 2008, 3:37 PM

like always showing off MuchoPuffs work........ :lol:

luved it z::
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Postby niyorco on Wed, Jan 23 2008, 4:50 PM

ha ha! You Krazy girl.
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Postby MuchoMuyKrazy on Wed, Jan 23 2008, 5:23 PM

me krazy .darkcrazy.

nope :LMAO: :shakeit:
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Postby niyorco on Thu, Jan 24 2008, 12:29 AM

ok then,

You wild!!!!!!!!
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Postby MuchoMuyKrazy on Thu, Jan 24 2008, 12:41 AM

:poundingfists: now why wild????
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