HELP IM ADDICTED

x3bouncyx3 · by **x3bouncyx3** on Fri, Jan 18 2008, 5:17 PM

[align=center]HI MY NAME IS VALERIA,
IM ADDICTED TO THIS GAME,
A WORLD OF EVIL NATURE,
AND CONSTENT PAIN,

GANG BANGIN AND DOPE SLANGIN,
WAS THE LIFE THAT I WAS GAVE,
FROM THE WOMB OF MY LONELY MOTHER,
INTO THE BARRIO I WAS MADE,

BROKEN HOME, SHATTERED HEART,
NO LIGHTS EVER REVEALED,
THE CRIES OF A BURNIN BABY,
WITH THE FLAMES NEEDIN TO BE SHIELD,

THE PAIN THAT I CARRIED IN MY HEART,
WAS SLOWED DOWN BY VIOLENCE,
BUT THEN I WAS ALONE,
COMING DOWN WITH NOTHING BUT SILENCE,

THE PAIN STILL REMAINS,
EVEN STRONGER THAN BEFORE,
OFF TO THE STREETS I HEADED,
IN SEARCH OF A VIOLENT WAR,

I NEED HELP,
IM CRYIN INSIDE,
AND NOBODY KNOWS,
WITH THE ADDICTION TO THIS GAME,
MANY PEOPLE HAVE DIED,

I DON'T WANNA LEAVE THIS LIFE,
TRYIN TO FIND A WAY,
TO COVER MY PAIN,
ALWAYS SEARCHIN AFTER THE FIRST TIME,
BECAUSE THE HIGH IS NEVA THE SAME,

DOIN ANYTHING FOR THIS GAME,
LOSIN FAMILY, AND KILLIN THE BRAIN,
FAILING TO REALIZE THE FACT,
IM THE ONE IMPLANTING THE PAIN,

LIKE THE LEAVES OF A TREE,
I CONTINUE TO FALL,
INTO A DARK HOLE,
DARKENED BY ANGER AND HATE,
WITH PAIN THATS BARELY SMALL,

I WANNA STAND UP,
AND STAND TALL,
BEFORE A BABY CAN WALK,
A BABY MUST LEARN TO CRAWL,

WITH ALL THIS SAID AND DONE,
IM NOW REALIZING MY PAIN,
BY TAKIN THE FIRST STEP TO GETTIN HELP,
AND ADMITTING IM ADDICTED TO THIS GAME...[/align][color=darkorchid] [/color]

elchicano · by **elchicano** on Fri, Jan 18 2008, 5:27 PM

and it rythms too

x3bouncyx3 · by **x3bouncyx3** on Fri, Jan 18 2008, 5:31 PM

Pika_Guerita · by **Pika_Guerita** on Fri, Jan 18 2008, 6:00 PM

chicano · by **chicano** on Sat, Jan 19 2008, 2:24 AM

[font=Comic Sans MS]I didn't like the topic you picked, but the lines and words you used were very good, I like your poetry a lot. Keep it up. [/font]

brwn_eyes · by **brwn_eyes** on Sat, Jan 19 2008, 12:19 PM

:Clap: nice.....once again Bouncy!!! :wink:

I really like reading your work. It's your own way of giving people an insight on your life!!!

thanks a lot for sharing!!!!!! :Clap: :Clap: :Clap: :Clap:

x3bouncyx3 · by **x3bouncyx3** on Sat, Jan 19 2008, 3:18 PM

brwn_eyes wrote::Clap: nice.....once again Bouncy!!! I really like reading your work. It's your own way of giving people an insight on your life!!!

thanks a lot for sharing!!!!!! :Clap: :Clap: :Clap: :Clap:

thanks...im glad u guys like it serio i am....i love to write hopefully i keep postin to let u guys no more about ma self thru ma poems

brwn_eyes · by **brwn_eyes** on Sat, Jan 19 2008, 4:37 PM

x3bouncyx3 wrote:
brwn_eyes wrote::Clap: nice.....once again Bouncy!!! I really like reading your work. It's your own way of giving people an insight on your life!!!

thanks a lot for sharing!!!!!! :Clap: :Clap: :Clap: :Clap:

thanks...im glad u guys like it serio i am....i love to write hopefully i keep postin to let u guys no more about ma self thru ma poems

Hopefully? HOPEFULLY? :hmp:

como que "hopefully". :wink:

you really should girl! :Clap:

x3bouncyx3 · by **x3bouncyx3** on Sat, Jan 19 2008, 11:10 PM

brwn_eyes wrote:
x3bouncyx3 wrote:
brwn_eyes wrote::Clap: nice.....once again Bouncy!!! I really like reading your work. It's your own way of giving people an insight on your life!!!

thanks a lot for sharing!!!!!! :Clap: :Clap: :Clap: :Clap:

thanks...im glad u guys like it serio i am....i love to write hopefully i keep postin to let u guys no more about ma self thru ma poems

Hopefully? HOPEFULLY? como que "hopefully". you really should girl! :Clap:

ight just for u i will :wink:

lol...haha

brwn_eyes · by **brwn_eyes** on Sun, Jan 20 2008, 1:11 PM

sounds good!!! :paz:

chicanas3xy13 · by **chicanas3xy13** on Tue, Feb 05 2008, 7:45 AM

I like all da words u used to describe it......

x3bouncyx3 · by **x3bouncyx3** on Thu, Feb 14 2008, 10:53 PM

thanks...mija

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