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Postby x3bouncyx3 on Tue, Jan 22 2008, 8:21 PM

I WANT IT...I NEED IT,
IT'S SOMETHING I MUST HAVE,
FEAMIN FOR THIS GAME,
LIKE A CRACK-HEAD IN REHAB,

BLUE RAGS...RED RAGS,
WHAT DOES IT ALL MEAN,
IS IT ME ADDICTED TO THIS HOOD?
TO THIS GAME?
LIKE A CRACK-HEAD FOR A DOPE FEAM,

I DON'T UNDERSTAND,
WHY I CANT GET THIS RIGHT,
WHY I CANT GET THIS STRAIT,
IS IT BECAUSE I'M LIKE A CRACK-HEAD,
REFUSING TO GIVE UP THE PIPE,

SO MANY EXCUSES FOR WHAT I DID,
WHERE I CAME FROM...WHAT I'VE SEEN,
TO WHAT I'VE DONE,
ONLY DIFFENCE BETWEEN,
ME AND A CRACK-HEAD,
HE HAS A PIPE, AND I HAVE A GUN,

WEAPONS OF DESTRUCTION,
BEING PAST AMONGST EACH OTHER,
WHY WAS I SO QUICK TO FIGHT,
THAT ESE FROM ANOTHER HOOD,
INSTEAD OF HELPIN HIM OUT??

GANG BANGIN,
DOPE SLANGIN,
CRACK SMOKIN,
ALL TRENDS OF THE COMMUNITY,
ALL OF US NEVA GAVE UP,

IT'S HARD TO STOP BANGIN,
WHEN YOU'VE DONE IT FOR SO LONG,
LIKE THE PIPE TO A CRACK-HEAD,
THE STREETS WILL ALWAYS BE MY HOME,

NO MATTER HOW MUCH I TRY,
I FAILED TO SUCCEED,
LIKE AN OLD WOUND PEELED,
ITS ONLY DESTINY....IS TO BLEED,

SOME OF MY WOUNDS CAN BE HEALED,
SOME JUST CANT,
SOME ADDICTS WILL ADMIT THEIR FEARS,
AND SOME JUST AINT....
ADDICTED
So der'z dis guy...right??? n well.... he kinda has ma heart....
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Postby x3bouncyx3 on Thu, Jan 24 2008, 5:41 PM

hope u guys like it :turu:
So der'z dis guy...right??? n well.... he kinda has ma heart....
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Re: Addicted

Postby brwn_eyes on Thu, Jan 24 2008, 6:02 PM

x3bouncyx3 wrote:
NO MATTER HOW MUCH I TRY,
I FAILED TO SUCCEED,
LIKE AN OLD WOUND PEELED,
ITS ONLY DESTINY....IS TO BLEED,




I like that part!!!! :yup:





I thought you were gonna leave us hangin girl!!!! :paddle: I was about to hunt you down.... :boink: I haven't seen ya in here in a while!!!


Thanks for sharing girl.......good as always!!!! :Clap: :Thumbsup:
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Postby x3bouncyx3 on Thu, Jan 24 2008, 6:22 PM

no here i am .wave. lol....i been writin morep poems so i havnt had time to come on here....lol no need to hunt me down lol i feel like a deer no lmao....n thanks im glad u like it
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Postby brwn_eyes on Thu, Jan 24 2008, 6:25 PM

^^^^ LOL..... :88: <<<<<<<<< like that???? hahahaha I kill me!!! :lol: no te creas girl!


pero enserio......glad you're back.....now where those poems?????? :paddle: :roflmao:
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Postby x3bouncyx3 on Thu, Jan 24 2008, 8:11 PM

ahhhhh so much violence damz....hahah im bouts to post 5 or 6 just so u wont beat me up....i mean hunt me down lmao
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Postby brwn_eyes on Fri, Jan 25 2008, 8:40 PM

:kickcan: :kickcan: :kickcan: :kickcan: (((waiting))) LOL.
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Postby x3bouncyx3 on Fri, Jan 25 2008, 11:49 PM

hahaha....im writin one rite now..i'll have it here by manana lol...i hope hahah
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Postby brwn_eyes on Sat, Jan 26 2008, 12:02 AM

sounds good.....pero no que ya tenias como 6??? LOL....just kidding!!! juuuust kidding!!!! :lol:
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Postby x3bouncyx3 on Sat, Jan 26 2008, 1:01 AM

hhahaha que pues,....i aint no supper dupper writer lol
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Postby brwn_eyes on Sat, Jan 26 2008, 1:14 AM

^^^ LOL@ supper dupper..... for some reason after reading your writing.....i find it hard to believe you say supper dupper... :lol: that was funny!


no pero bueno.....tomate el tiempo necesario....i'll patiently wait....LOL....pero no por mucho tiempo eh...LOL...
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Postby iPedro on Sat, Jan 26 2008, 12:01 PM

Hey, x3bouncyx3 maybe You should write one about Patience . ehem, Sophie


Keep up the good job! :cool:
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