"A sorrow man"

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"A sorrow man"

Postby niyorco on Mon, Jan 28 2008, 5:32 PM

No scraps of meat to be tossed,

a coinless cup in his hand.

Weather drops on his head.

And all ignore the sorrow man.




A simple smile that he tosses

To a laughing child passing by.

She returns the gesture with a wave

But mommy forces her quick goodbye….




All ignore the sorrow man

Want him erased from their world.

But he never begs for a single coin

The token divided his life,

Some time ago……
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Postby brwn_eyes on Tue, Jan 29 2008, 12:38 PM

:Clap: :Clap: Nice....as always!!!! :wink: When I read your writing, I can always vision it! What talent i tell ya!!! :wink: :Clap:
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Postby lunar on Tue, Jan 29 2008, 1:33 PM

^ ditto
reminds me of my trying times
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Postby niyorco on Tue, Jan 29 2008, 2:03 PM

Thank you both.

"Trying times" Lunar?
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