"sip"

niyorco · by **niyorco** on Mon, Jan 28 2008, 7:59 PM

With the walls closing in
and the world at its end
the smoke in my hand
my sanity begins

to fade........

or so it seems
that an evil dream
haunts above me
and eats at its peak
in disgusting disbelief

I laugh at the torture
as the insanity speaks......

"take with you these words of hell
your life is unique and your mind as well
I am not biased but my gates are set
for those who live in wickedness."

With smoke in my lungs
the bottle on the table
I exhale my poison
and sip with this angel...

of death.......

or is it,
just a vision
of another world wicked..........

I'll walk the gates
when that day comes
until then my friend
I'll sip tequila's gun.

brwn_eyes · by **brwn_eyes** on Tue, Jan 29 2008, 12:41 PM

this has got to be my favorite one so far!!!!! :yup: I really like the way it was written.... good job once again!!!! I always look forward to reading your work!!!!!! :Thumbsup:

niyorco · by **niyorco** on Tue, Jan 29 2008, 2:04 PM

Thank you brwn eyes!

brwn_eyes · by **brwn_eyes** on Tue, Jan 29 2008, 7:14 PM

you are very welcome............thank YOU!!!!! :Clap:

niyorco · by **niyorco** on Wed, Jan 30 2008, 1:47 AM

"sip"

"sip"

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