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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Wed, Jan 30 2008, 2:05 AM    Post subject:  My Lost Love Reply with quote

Thoughts about you drive me crazy
Lately I been missing my ex-lady
I remeber the first time I met you
You were shy and feelin kinda blue
I asked why so shy & what's wrong?
You looked at me and u tried to be strong
You didn't wanted to shed a tear from your eye
And I told you there is no reason for you to cry
So ever since then I started talking to you on the phone
We spent more then 2 hours and kicked it when you were alone
I lived in a crazy life, and messing around all the time
You didn't mind, you just sticked by my side
I thought about you when I was with my homies
Then I started to think about you more when I was feeling kinda lonely
I told you how felt about you and that I really like you
You said the exact same thing and that you really like me,too
So we made it official as couples
I never really thought about us as couple we were more like lovers
Then I had the balls to say I love you after a month
You cried. Gave me a big kiss and a big ass hug
I thought we were gonna last for very long time
Until tradegy hit hard that one cold air night
You were coming home from your friends house
You called me just incase if I was around town
I told you I was home and that I love you with all my heart
But then I heard gun shots I could hear from the park
So I ran just to make sure if you were safe
But instead you were laying down the ground screaming in pain
I started to scream for help
But there was no one else
You passed away after two days
My mind was like a blur haze
You died as a sweet mysterious angel
And you were so greatful
I miss you and I still love you a lot
I can't wait to see you on top on da spot


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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Wed, Jan 30 2008, 9:58 AM    Post subject:   Reply with quote

Chido I like big ASS hugs too


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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Wed, Jan 30 2008, 10:37 AM    Post subject:   Reply with quote

dammmm.....thats hella sad....i love it..... [Cool]


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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Wed, Jan 30 2008, 1:00 PM    Post subject:   Reply with quote

i'm just curious.....did this really happen? [Hmmm]


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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Thu, Jan 31 2008, 4:38 AM    Post subject:   Reply with quote

same question, is this true? its sad, but i like it


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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Thu, Jan 31 2008, 10:25 AM    Post subject:   Reply with quote

i think therez a tear in muh eye.......... [Crying or Very sad]


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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Thu, Jan 31 2008, 5:25 PM    Post subject:   Reply with quote

Wow, thats a good one....same question as well is this true?


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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Tue, Jun 10 2008, 11:33 AM    Post subject:   Reply with quote

awww thats so cute!!!
ya got a good heart
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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Tue, Jun 10 2008, 7:08 PM    Post subject:   Reply with quote

Is this real, lazy?

I thought the poem was very good, came out nice...


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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Tue, Jun 10 2008, 8:24 PM    Post subject:   Reply with quote


yo dats sad.......same like everybody is it true????
but bravo on da poem homie []


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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Thu, Jul 10 2008, 3:19 AM    Post subject:   Reply with quote

To let everyone know is that poem not real. I just wanna let everyone know that appearciate your loves as much as you can. Never take them for granted. Always look forward for the next day and just have a smile for your lover and for yourself. Ladies you deserve better and you are appearciate. Fellas, don't treat the ladies around you like bitches or hoes you'll never know who's gonna be your lucky lady. Peace and take care everyone. From your homie Mr. Lazy.


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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Wed, Jul 16 2008, 12:48 AM    Post subject:   Reply with quote

lol orale. thanks for clearing that up for us. deep anyway. [Cool]


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