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Mr. Lazy
Antojito

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View Single Post Posted: Wed, Jan 30 2008, 2:05 AM Post subject: My Lost Love

Thoughts about you drive me crazy Lately I been missing my ex-lady I remeber the first time I met you You were shy and feelin kinda blue I asked why so shy & what's wrong? You looked at me and u tried to be strong You didn't wanted to shed a tear from your eye And I told you there is no reason for you to cry So ever since then I started talking to you on the phone We spent more then 2 hours and kicked it when you were alone I lived in a crazy life, and messing around all the time You didn't mind, you just sticked by my side I thought about you when I was with my homies Then I started to think about you more when I was feeling kinda lonely I told you how felt about you and that I really like you You said the exact same thing and that you really like me,too So we made it official as couples I never really thought about us as couple we were more like lovers Then I had the balls to say I love you after a month You cried. Gave me a big kiss and a big ass hug I thought we were gonna last for very long time Until tradegy hit hard that one cold air night You were coming home from your friends house You called me just incase if I was around town I told you I was home and that I love you with all my heart But then I heard gun shots I could hear from the park So I ran just to make sure if you were safe But instead you were laying down the ground screaming in pain I started to scream for help But there was no one else You passed away after two days My mind was like a blur haze You died as a sweet mysterious angel And you were so greatful I miss you and I still love you a lot I can't wait to see you on top on da spot

3lmo 3lmo miss diana
Como un sueño

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View Single Post Posted: Wed, Jan 30 2008, 9:58 AM Post subject:

Chido I like big ASS hugs too Current Mood: _________________ (wats in your mouth has been there before)

chicanas3xy13
I can get used to this

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View Single Post Posted: Wed, Jan 30 2008, 10:37 AM Post subject:

dammmm.....thats hella sad....i love it..... Current Mood: _________________ x3 ALWAYZ LOOK UP N3V3R LOOK DOWN B3CAUS3 TH3R3'S ALWAYZ SOM3ON3 TH3R3 TO FC YOU OV3R L3ARN FROM TH3 PAST LIV3 IN TH3 PR3S3NT PLAN FOR TH3 FUTUR3 X3

brwn_eyes
Amores Perros!

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View Single Post Posted: Wed, Jan 30 2008, 1:00 PM Post subject:

i'm just curious.....did this really happen? Current Mood:

ur1nonly
° i miss elmo =( °
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View Single Post Posted: Thu, Jan 31 2008, 4:38 AM Post subject:

same question, is this true? its sad, but i like it _________________ If you get a chance, take it. If it changes your life, let it!

~*smileznlaughter*~
Antojito

Joined: Oct 16 2007
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View Single Post Posted: Thu, Jan 31 2008, 10:25 AM Post subject:

i think therez a tear in muh eye.......... Current Mood: _________________ \|~3-13-08---->> im ALL hiz and he'z ALL mine!~\|

Pika_Guerita
*Bang Bang*
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View Single Post Posted: Thu, Jan 31 2008, 5:25 PM Post subject:

Wow, thats a good one....same question as well is this true? Current Mood: _________________ R.I.P. Tia Sherly <3 you always and forever

angel.boo
Antojito

Joined: Apr 21 2008
Posts: 6
Location: a lil callesita called missin you street....

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View Single Post Posted: Tue, Jun 10 2008, 11:33 AM Post subject:

awww thats so cute!!! ya got a good heart Current Mood:

chicano
Como un sueño

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View Single Post Posted: Tue, Jun 10 2008, 7:08 PM Post subject:

Is this real, lazy? I thought the poem was very good, came out nice... Current Mood: _________________ her [9:59 P.M.]: phss im never letting you go.. i'll be bugging you if your not with me.. cuz you know what? aha Y0UR MiNE.. jUP Mi0.. S0 fCK EVERY0NE ELSE.. CUZ i L0VE Y0U & iM G0NNA BE WiTH Y0U f0REVER. Y0UR tHE 0NE f0R ME. Right..

.:Lucky:.
Antojito

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View Single Post Posted: Tue, Jun 10 2008, 8:24 PM Post subject:

yo dats sad.......same like everybody is it true???? but bravo on da poem homie

Mr. Lazy
Antojito

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Location: SCV,CA

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View Single Post Posted: Thu, Jul 10 2008, 3:19 AM Post subject:

To let everyone know is that poem not real. I just wanna let everyone know that appearciate your loves as much as you can. Never take them for granted. Always look forward for the next day and just have a smile for your lover and for yourself. Ladies you deserve better and you are appearciate. Fellas, don't treat the ladies around you like bitches or hoes you'll never know who's gonna be your lucky lady. Peace and take care everyone. From your homie Mr. Lazy.

iPedro
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View Single Post Posted: Wed, Jul 16 2008, 12:48 AM Post subject:

lol orale. thanks for clearing that up for us. deep anyway. Current Mood:

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