My Love Poem

Mr. Lazy · by **Mr. Lazy** on Thu, Feb 07 2008, 11:36 PM

As I lay on this lonely bed
I can't get ur beauty off my head
You got this vato hypnotized
I'm thinkin' of you and ur brown eyes
Girl, you blow my mind
I'll walk through many miles
Just see ur beautiful smile
I'll promise I'll never cheat
If I ever do let God punish me
I can't never tell you a lie
I'll promise not to make you cry
I'll never make you feel sad
All I want you is to be glad
Baby girl, you drive me crazy
I sometimes wish you could be my lady...

chicano · by **chicano** on Thu, Feb 07 2008, 11:40 PM

[font=Comic Sans MS]It's very unoriginal, but hey...it's not the worst I've heard. ^_~ [/font]

3lmo · by **3lmo** on Fri, Feb 08 2008, 9:19 AM

Im with Chicano...its not very original

mz_lety · by **mz_lety** on Fri, Feb 08 2008, 5:54 PM

[font=Comic Sans MS]Hey you get a 10 for trying. if my man made the effort to write ME a poem, I would so so so love it[/font] z::

Lonewolf · by **Lonewolf** on Fri, Feb 08 2008, 7:18 PM

DANG!!! Ladies are so hard to please . . First they get all mad at us vatos por que we are not all romantic and shit, and now this vato comes up with some poesia and he gets shot down. That's why I don't even try to go there. LOL . . Puras criticas :blushing:

My Love Poem

My Love Poem

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