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Postby niyorco on Thu, Feb 14 2008, 3:34 PM

In arrows point with the bloody end,
I always knew her greed would begin.

and now it points,
aimed at my heart...
the one that became cursed
at my own trusting fault.

Here I lie,
a victim at hand.
a simple thought
brings her deadly hand

I am her demand.
her next prey...
one without a hope
as some would say.

Staring at my last chance...
the poison arrow
that aims at glance.......
to bring me sorrow.
..........................and no romance
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Postby brwn_eyes on Sat, Feb 16 2008, 1:22 PM

awwwww......that was a little different than your others......never the less.....great as always!!! I really liked that one!!!! :yup: :yup: you da bomb!!! :lol: :wink:
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Postby niyorco on Sat, Feb 16 2008, 3:40 PM

Thank you!
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Postby chicano on Sun, Feb 17 2008, 3:50 AM

[font=Comic Sans MS] Pretty good. :cool: [/font]
her [9:59 P.M.]: phss im never letting you go..
i'll be bugging you if your not with me.. cuz you know what?
aha Y0UR MiNE.. jUP Mi0.. S0 fCK EVERY0NE ELSE.. CUZ i L0VE
Y0U & iM G0NNA BE WiTH Y0U f0REVER. Y0UR tHE 0NE f0R ME.

Right..
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Postby niyorco on Sun, Feb 17 2008, 2:20 PM

thanks Chicano.
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Postby Pika_Guerita on Mon, Feb 18 2008, 2:51 PM

:Clap: Thats a good one...


"her next prey"-> geeze, thats a nice way to put it..lol but I love it... :paz:
R.I.P. Tia Sherly <3 you always and forever
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Postby niyorco on Tue, Feb 19 2008, 7:13 PM

Thank you guerita.
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