...and so

niyorco · by **niyorco** on Mon, Mar 17 2008, 10:40 PM

(For Carla the vampire)

And so,
the moon creeps beneath
her step,
she takes a smile
with every breath
and sips the tasty blood
of the suffering soul left.

And so,
her life lives beyond the stars
a ruthless life she feels is called
the hell nears her dammed fall
as she awaits the demon crawl
unafraid beneath it all.

Untouched in the damned world.
and lives in misery on her own
but damned forever shown
an immortal forever scorned
in the world so cold and old

forever to walk within
the land
and never taste the awaiting hand
of death thats feared or even planned

in a circle that walls her soul
unescapable from this world
Forever immortal in this world......
as tears form her soul thats torn.
to sing her story as it unfolds.......

brwn_eyes · by **brwn_eyes** on Tue, Mar 18 2008, 3:49 PM

:Clap: :Clap: I like this one....a little different from the others i have read but like always....really good!!!! :wink:

chicano · by **chicano** on Tue, Mar 18 2008, 3:59 PM

[font=Comic Sans MS]Thanks for bringing something different and original to poetry. Keep up the good work, I love your poems...and this one is up on my favorite list.[/font]

niyorco · by **niyorco** on Tue, Mar 18 2008, 8:09 PM

Thank you both. Glad you enjoyed. -- Niyorco

mz_lety · by **mz_lety** on Wed, Mar 19 2008, 1:10 PM

[font=Comic Sans MS]VERY NICE[/font]

Pika_Guerita · by **Pika_Guerita** on Wed, Mar 19 2008, 5:47 PM

:Clap: Thats very....very nice... :Clap:

niyorco · by **niyorco** on Thu, Mar 20 2008, 1:36 AM

^^ Thanks all!

...and so

...and so

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