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3lmo Put Your Head On My Shoulder
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View Single Post Posted: Sat, May 17 2008, 2:27 PM Post subject: M1 Am1ga

I wrote this song/poem 2 years ago, when i had my first love MI AMIGA Me Acuerdo Muy Bien Te conocí por primera vez El asunto es no hablo entonces Es tiempo que te cuente mi razón Supuestamente no soy ladrón Pero me da ganas de robarte el corazón Te pido perdón porque te gasto tu tiempo Te aburro simón eso si es cierto Pero tengo mi razón en un poquito te cuento Me enamore de ti pero es amor en silencio Me da miedo decirte como me siento Voy a quedar cayado hasta que este muerto Me apodas pancho O ingrato Eres muy graciosa y por eso te amo Simón esto solo es una canción Pero en frente de ella pierdo la razón Quisiera que supiera de mis pensamientos Nunca se me olvidaran esos momentos Los buenos y los malos sin ninguna duda Será pecado compararla con la luna Es obvio que ella es una estrella Porque el brillo de ella es más bella En serio no te miento no soy siego Yo la miro diario bueno o enfermo Gracias a ella estoy bien y sano Es bien inteligente y por eso la amo Current Mood:

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View Single Post Posted: Sat, May 17 2008, 8:38 PM Post subject:

Good rhyme, te aventaste Current Mood:

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View Single Post Posted: Sat, May 17 2008, 9:28 PM Post subject:

aye your a fine artist i can relate to this elmo i wanted to cry pero pues now she is just part of my past asi como yo solo soy una parte de su pasado fue solo una hermosa locura una hermosa ilusion, vi las cosas de una manera hermosa pero pues chalez con eso ya ni llorar es bueno Current Mood:

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View Single Post Posted: Sat, May 17 2008, 9:49 PM Post subject:

Hey 3lmo, Speaking of friends and poemas, you should write your friend a nice poem for her birthday. I think she will appreciate it. Just a suggestion Current Mood:

3lmo Put Your Head On My Shoulder
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Posted: Sat, May 17 2008, 11:26 PM Post subject:

	iPete dijo:
	Hey 3lmo, Speaking of friends and poemas, you should write your friend a nice poem for her birthday. I think she will appreciate it. Just a suggestion

if your talkin bout my friend from school,"yakylop".....that poem is about her homie..... [Cool]

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View Single Post Posted: Sat, May 17 2008, 11:41 PM Post subject:

Very deep, I loved this one. ;] Spanish poetry, lyrics always sound beautiful. Current Mood: _________________ her [9:59 P.M.]: phss im never letting you go.. i'll be bugging you if your not with me.. cuz you know what? aha Y0UR MiNE.. jUP Mi0.. S0 fCK EVERY0NE ELSE.. CUZ i L0VE Y0U & iM G0NNA BE WiTH Y0U f0REVER. Y0UR tHE 0NE f0R ME. Right..

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View Single Post Posted: Sun, May 18 2008, 6:46 AM Post subject:

^ i agree.... poetry is beautiful in spanish i loved this elmo... didnt know u had it in u _________________ numeros para las cuentas la mano para el amigo caricias para las hombres balas pa' los enemigos

3lmo Put Your Head On My Shoulder
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Posted: Sun, May 18 2008, 10:26 PM Post subject:

	ur1nonly dijo:
	^ i agree.... poetry is beautiful in spanish i loved this elmo... didnt know u had it in u

i have always had it in me, I just dont let it out as much as I should [Wink]

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View Single Post Posted: Sun, May 18 2008, 10:47 PM Post subject:

Te dejaste caer la grena. _________________ Those who want to do good are not selfish. They are not in a hurry. They know that to impregnate people with good requires a long time. But evil has wings. To build a house takes time, it's destruction takes none. - Mohandas Gandhi "I've experienced being in a relationship where a girl is 16 years old, but all I saw was immaturity."

3lmo Put Your Head On My Shoulder
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View Single Post Posted: Mon, May 19 2008, 7:57 AM Post subject:

^^what does that mean foo? Current Mood:

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Posted: Mon, May 19 2008, 10:48 AM Post subject:

3lmo dijo:

	iPete dijo:
	Hey 3lmo, Speaking of friends and poemas, you should write your friend a nice poem for her birthday. I think she will appreciate it. Just a suggestion

if your talkin bout my friend from school,"yakylop".....that poem is about her homie..... [Cool]

And don't forget the chocolates.

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