M0mmy DaDdY I...

W1ck3d_S0ul · by **W1ck3d_S0ul** on Fri, May 30 2008, 1:31 AM

I Know It's very long but if you have the patience and the time read and Tell me what ya'll think does it stink, no good, hella good, es aight, it need work, tell me what ya'll think..!!!1

Cruizin them calles
going down the streets where i grew up not recognizing anything
I'm in a world not my own
it doesnt look like the place where i was born
from which at 4 years old i was so cruelly torn
i assure you que alla oy huebiera estado mucho mas mejor

Mommy Daddy I didn't want to leave ma home
I didn't want to leave mi hermanita en el pantion all alone
quien le llevera flores frescas
quien le platicara mis cosas
si no soy yo no puede ser ninguno otra persona

Mommy Daddy i'm still that lost lil girl
mourning for her sisters soul
not bien able to let go
I need her guidence

please hug me and don't let go
I need your comfort I need your amor
Mommy Daddy que hago I feel so alone
ya nose que debo hacer
I can't go back cuz i know que yo hare algo de lo que despues me arrepentire
but i want to go see her in her grave
put red roses on her cross
I've cried myself constantly to sleep

I want to sit beside her grave until i comprehend fully
that she's gone and the only thing I got is memmories
tell her that i miss her
that I need to hear her voice
que with out her this life isnt worth a single breath of mine
tal ves por eso toda via tiene sus lil hands in mine
holding a spirits hand through out time
I remember that one night
you stood right next to me your hand holding mine
telling me that everything will be alright
that I'll make it with you by my side

Look at me now hermanita
dime am i the women you thought to make of me?
Have i let you down completely?
Questions you'll never be able to answer for me
just wanted to let you know that here I am still missin you
wishing I was there with you
holding your lil hand in mine
telling me everything will be alright
even though you was two years younger
you protected me like if you was older

Todavia me acuerdo de tus ojos tan oscuros y muy hermosos
tu piel morena, pelo castano
perdon si algun dia te tome de ambano
mientras que estuviste viva
yo me acuerdo que todo estaba lleno de sonrisas
aunque estabamos en la pobresa
con tigo era como si estuvieramos en la requiza
de que sirve el dinero que tenemos ahora
si no te puedes regresar a mi lado
Cuando te fuiste i had to pretend to be the strong one
can i stop now can i
because i thought that maybe if our family saw me agauntandome mis lagrimas
que todo would be alright
that they would see that i moved on
and had accepted that you went into the light
the reality is im still stuck on that you may still be alive
even though i know for sure that you are infact dead
past away, Mi Angelito de ojos negros, pelo castano, y piel morena tu mi bebe eres mi nena

Stuck in mi corason untill the end of time
still in my heart having that lil ray of sun shine
having to let you go
was the most hardest thing that i had to face in my life time
that is why i don't let ppl come into my corason
rather it remain frozen to the rest of the world
to the few i have opened it too
my heart they've broken in two
then put it back together then broke it one last time

None-the-less this is the life I'm living
missing ma lil baby, Mi Hermanita
stuck in lil kid mode
missing you with all of ma soul
wishing you i can once again hold
and never once again let go

Mommy daddy why did she have to go
she was only 2 years old
can someone please tell me why did this happen at all
stuck in lil kid mode
asking these type of questions making my heart turn to stone
turned my heart from a ray of light to an icy cold object
crazy insane for revenge
tapping into my psycho status
all i got in this life and el corason is revenge
and no-one can stop it...

Sombra AKA Ang3l
March 17, 2008

Lonewolf · by **Lonewolf** on Fri, May 30 2008, 1:35 AM

I'm going to take a rain check on the read (A) . . 'cause tu sabes no? se me estan cruzando los ojos

but I'll surely read it al rato and hollar back at ya' :wink:

W1ck3d_S0ul · by **W1ck3d_S0ul** on Fri, May 30 2008, 1:42 AM

aight ya dijiste eh, te voy a tomar la palabra on this lol

chicano · by **chicano** on Fri, May 30 2008, 5:42 PM

[font=Comic Sans MS]I did like this, ana. The only thing that didn't go well along with it was the constant changing between english and spanish. Other than that, the poem was well thought of.[/font]

W1ck3d_S0ul · by **W1ck3d_S0ul** on Fri, May 30 2008, 7:21 PM

really you did

me da gusto que you did

and that's what i likes bout ma poems the spanish to english, english to spanish part but es koo we all got our preferecnes thanx for feedback chicano preciate it

Lonewolf · by **Lonewolf** on Sun, Jun 01 2008, 11:30 AM

<Bal3Ful_Ang3l> wrote:aight ya dijiste eh, te voy a tomar la palabra on this lol

Mija that was beautiful . . I can feel your soul poured out en esta poesia dedicada a tu linda hermanita.

You know, I'm going to re-read this and put myself into it when I'm fully in my zone all alone and in deep thought, then I'm going to pm you with some toughts of my own, ok?

W1ck3d_S0ul · by **W1ck3d_S0ul** on Sun, Jun 01 2008, 12:40 PM

:oops: thank you, your sweet

and yea i did i cried when i wrote it :lloroso:

sound good to me, i wanna hear your deep thoughts on what you think

i'k like that

IntellectualMemba · by **IntellectualMemba** on Mon, Jun 02 2008, 12:39 PM

they say truth is ugly but ur truth is poetry at another level. keep at it anita

W1ck3d_S0ul · by **W1ck3d_S0ul** on Tue, Jun 03 2008, 8:43 PM

im not sure what esactly sure what it is you sed bout ma poem but thanx B

lol ((mind sayin dem words in a langauge Ana can understand lol hehehe

IntellectualMemba · by **IntellectualMemba** on Wed, Jun 04 2008, 12:01 PM

lmao^^ ur shit true spoken.

W1ck3d_S0ul · by **W1ck3d_S0ul** on Wed, Jun 04 2008, 6:08 PM

oooo ok lol THANK YOU B

(( i finally got what you meant after readin it another day lol )) hahaha

funny lol

IntellectualMemba · by **IntellectualMemba** on Thu, Jun 05 2008, 11:08 AM

word.

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