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niyorco
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View Single Post Posted: Tue, Jul 01 2008, 2:40 AM Post subject: storm hour

Let me tell you about the clash of clouds Beneath the rays of light, All echoes that sound throughout the gleaming night. The Gods are calling, while shadows dance. The Angels above Hold a praying stance ………… a scene of romance, as ravens fly. Call to each other in siren cries. Shoulders smooth and feathered wings. Awaiting the lightening That the full moon brings………. Soaring endlessly …………………so breathlessly And await in thunder ……………………..while the storm’s hour, sings. _________________ Niyorco Books Presents: "Lockdown -- a barrio tale" A Chicano Urban theme novel. Now available through myspace! Check it out in myspace blogs! http://myspace.com/Niyorco

MzBrownEyes
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View Single Post Posted: Tue, Jul 01 2008, 5:17 AM Post subject:

beautifully done niyo! _________________ Tell it like it is

chicano
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View Single Post Posted: Tue, Jul 01 2008, 11:49 AM Post subject:

Love the originality, thanks for sharing. Current Mood: _________________ her [9:59 P.M.]: phss im never letting you go.. i'll be bugging you if your not with me.. cuz you know what? aha Y0UR MiNE.. jUP Mi0.. S0 fCK EVERY0NE ELSE.. CUZ i L0VE Y0U & iM G0NNA BE WiTH Y0U f0REVER. Y0UR tHE 0NE f0R ME. Right..

niyorco
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View Single Post Posted: Tue, Jul 01 2008, 2:03 PM Post subject:

Thanks to the both of you. Good to hear you enjoyed it. _________________ Niyorco Books Presents: "Lockdown -- a barrio tale" A Chicano Urban theme novel. Now available through myspace! Check it out in myspace blogs! http://myspace.com/Niyorco

iPedro
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View Single Post Posted: Thu, Jul 03 2008, 9:20 PM Post subject:

Good lines, niyorco. I digg that. Current Mood:

niyorco
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View Single Post Posted: Fri, Jul 04 2008, 8:03 PM Post subject:

orale, thanks bro! _________________ Niyorco Books Presents: "Lockdown -- a barrio tale" A Chicano Urban theme novel. Now available through myspace! Check it out in myspace blogs! http://myspace.com/Niyorco

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