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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Tue, Jul 01 2008, 2:40 AM    Post subject:  storm hour Reply with quote

Let me tell you about the clash of clouds
Beneath the rays of light,
All echoes that sound
throughout the gleaming night.

The Gods are calling,
while shadows dance.
The Angels above
Hold a praying stance

………… a scene of romance,
as ravens fly.

Call to each other
in siren cries.

Shoulders smooth
and feathered wings.

Awaiting the lightening
That the full moon brings……….

Soaring endlessly
…………………so breathlessly
And await in thunder
……………………..while the storm’s hour, sings.


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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Tue, Jul 01 2008, 5:17 AM    Post subject:   Reply with quote

beautifully done niyo! [] [] []


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View Single PostView Single Post PostPosted: Tue, Jul 01 2008, 11:49 AM    Post subject:   Reply with quote

Love the originality, thanks for sharing.


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Thanks to the both of you. Good to hear you enjoyed it.


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Good lines, niyorco. I digg that. [Cool]


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orale, thanks bro! [Cool]


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