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Fate

Postby DOPEYX on Fri, Jul 04 2008, 12:35 PM

Fate

by VL aka Dopey



Everyone searches for love,
while I just sit here and wait.
There's no need to push or shove,
when you believe in fate.
My soulmate is out there,
we'll be united one day.
And if God separates us,
We'll meet in heaven again.
I've had lots of lovers,
and they were all great people.
But they aren't the one,
because their efforts were feeble.
Our differences split us,
because our love wasn't equal.
They didn't want to make it work,
instead they all became quitters.
I can't be mad, or bitter
I've learned to accept things.
True love has infinite sequels,
cause true love lacks an ending.
My soulmate and I
will make up after every fight.
We'll smile to each other,
even when things aren't going right.
So maybe my love won't come,
this minute, this hour, or tonight.
But, it is inevitable,
that we'll meet in this lifetime.
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Postby Tx_2_Id on Fri, Jul 04 2008, 3:35 PM

"Our differences split us,
because our love wasn't equal.
They didn't want to make it work,
instead they all became quitters" well said I've experience my fair share of quitters :paz:
The end of life isn't death; true death can occur only when people forget you!
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Postby chicano on Fri, Jul 04 2008, 9:15 PM

[font=Comic Sans MS]Another great poem.

Just beautiful.
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her [9:59 P.M.]: phss im never letting you go..
i'll be bugging you if your not with me.. cuz you know what?
aha Y0UR MiNE.. jUP Mi0.. S0 fCK EVERY0NE ELSE.. CUZ i L0VE
Y0U & iM G0NNA BE WiTH Y0U f0REVER. Y0UR tHE 0NE f0R ME.

Right..
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Postby DOPEYX on Sat, Jul 05 2008, 3:57 PM

Thanks for takin' time to read my shiet! haha

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Postby Tx_2_Id on Sat, Jul 05 2008, 3:58 PM

No Problem I wish I had a way with words like you do. :paz:
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Postby DOPEYX on Sat, Jul 05 2008, 4:10 PM

Tx_2_Id wrote:No Problem I wish I had a way with words like you do. :paz:


I talk how I write... haha
People find it amuzing.

I try not to over think my poetry, because then I feel like it doesn't come straight from the heart. I like my shit to be as raw as possible.
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Postby iPedro on Sun, Jul 13 2008, 8:53 PM

ThaT's deep... I like the style. kudos!
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Postby La.Leona on Wed, Jul 30 2008, 2:14 AM

coo poem :)
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Postby Lonewolf on Wed, Jul 30 2008, 3:10 PM

Nice, keep 'em coming girl. I love to read and ponder on poetic feels of love and about life, like what you wrote above.
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Postby DyZiiR on Wed, Oct 22 2008, 10:58 AM

i really like this poem dopey.. thanx for postin it
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Postby 3lmo on Wed, Oct 22 2008, 11:04 AM

Im so feelin it, I want to write one now...but I probly wont post it
(wats in your mouth has been there before)
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Postby niyorco on Wed, Oct 22 2008, 1:56 PM

nicely done. Loved how you delivered the mood.
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